Mt. Baldy

The day begins, 

at the base.

Lomming above

the majestic 

mountain,

A glorified

pile of rocks. 

The trek upwards

never ends

lungs gasping for air

muscles screaming in pain

yet the boys endure

perservere

continue on 

in this never ending battle against mother nature.

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