Movement

The sky still whispers

In slowly moving slumber

Falling, I listen 

This poem is about: 
Me

Comments

AK123654

2 years ago

I like all of the figurative language it is really fun and helps me picture things very

clearly. I think it is simple and calming and I really like it. It is not super clear

but I'm assuming that the falling is falling to sleep. Other than, really great.

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