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Mother

Wed, 04/30/2014 - 15:47 -- rcl2514

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I'd go back in time, save her from down under.

Lift her up, change her views.

I look at her now: scars intact,

blue eyes faded,

hair lackluster,

faith defeated.

 

I'd go back and give her kind words.

I'd lift her up, highlight her smarts.

I look at her now,

child-like and silly.

 

If I could go back or maybe in the next mill-en-i-um,

I'd make sure she was safe,

wherever she landed.

I'd battle her demons.

I'd give her my soul.

I look at her now...

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