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To put a smile to your face

are my poetic intentions

Just asking how are you

are my poetic courtesy

penetrable gazing to eyes that mesmorize

is my poetic sensation

to tell you that you're stunning

its just my poetic compliments from me to you

Your soothing skin, and juicy lips

are my poetic stimulation

Your touch and kiss,

arouses my poetic commencement

Igniting your warmth

sends my heart to a better poetic place

when you entangle in my powerful arms

you become my poetic partner

knowing your biggest aspiration

gives me poetic chills

All your insecurities, and fears

secures my poetic protection that you're safe

As well as your past misfortunes, and cries

are poetic life tribulations

For though Life can be challenging

to God, he conveys poetic proverbs reminding that there is light at the end of the tunnel

But to have your heart and trust,

there are series of poetic steps i must earn

So I'll say this, that just being with you,

is not poetically correct

instead, it's poetically all i ever wanted

This poem is about:

Me

Guide that inspired this poem:

Word Warriors 1: Feedback- The Poetic Kind!

Comments

dolvas

9 years ago

Wow...lucky girl

MVP-Most Valuable Poet

9 years ago

thanks 4 comments

dolvas

9 years ago

Very creative. ..loving this one...

MVP-Most Valuable Poet

9 years ago

thank you

means so much to me

JanaLentz

9 years ago

I absolutely love this one. It has been nice to come back after a break to read your wonderful poems. You are such an inspiring writer!

<3

MVP-Most Valuable Poet

9 years ago

hey sweetie

how you been? glad you came back to read more poems

thank you for reading one of my recent poems-it's very genuine in all i said

thank you for the luv and support, check out my other poems

also, i'm writing a new one-should have it ready by today

how would you feel about writing a collaborative poem together?

JanaLentz

9 years ago

I've been alright. Just kept busy with work and school and just recently a death in the family. How have you been?

I will definitely check out your other poems! How could I not? You're my favorite poet on here. :)

I'm down for a collaborative poem! :)

MVP-Most Valuable Poet

9 years ago

that's great jana

i'm glad you're busy with school and work, keeps you focus, and active

my condolescence to your family member, sad to hear

i'm been well-just finish writing my new poem

i'm humble to know that i'm your favorite poet

when i read your poems-from what i gather, you talked alot about anger, fears, distrust

let's write something about that...........share me your thoughts............

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