Most Valuable Poet YouTube

Peace and blessingsĀ 

love y'allĀ 

check out my new YouTube channel call " Most Valuable Poet "

Have videos done and counting

subscribe, like and share šŸ™šŸ¾

channel are ministries ordain by Christ Jesus šŸ™šŸ¾

This poem is about: 
Me
My community
My country
Our world

Comments

Lvargas

Hey MVP this is luis, so um this is my first poem I've written since may before I graduated.

Ā 

Ā 

Dark road by: Luis V

I walk down this road

the road that I discovered on my own

No one around me

no one near meĀ 

I noticed this beautiful girl on my way homeĀ 

but her eyes were glowing redĀ 

she looked like the daughter of the devil

She told me to take the bite of the appleĀ 

and my eyes will be open

but I just kept on walking and didn't take the bite out of the apple

What kind of woman is this?

A woman of good or a woman of evil?

Whatever it is I want no part of herĀ 

So I just kept walking down this dark and lonely roadĀ 

I kept on walking so that I can find the place that I was meant to go

As I kept walking I came across another womanĀ 

A woman so sweet she took me inĀ 

Took care of meĀ 

I felt at peaceĀ 

But love is all I ever need

Is this woman the right one for me?

I honestly do not knowĀ 

but if she is then we'll run into each other again sometime down the futureĀ 

But it's hard to believe that I had to leave her behindĀ 

Ā 

MVP-Most Valuable Poet

PowerfulĀ 

great job is discernmentĀ 

subscribe to my YouTube channelĀ 

Lvargas

Hey MVP this is luis, so um this is my first poem I've written since may before I graduated.

Ā 

Ā 

Dark road by: Luis V

I walk down this road

the road that I discovered on my own

No one around me

no one near meĀ 

I noticed this beautiful girl on my way homeĀ 

but her eyes were glowing redĀ 

she looked like the daughter of the devil

She told me to take the bite of the appleĀ 

and my eyes will be open

but I just kept on walking and didn't take the bite out of the apple

What kind of woman is this?

A woman of good or a woman of evil?

Whatever it is I want no part of herĀ 

So I just kept walking down this dark and lonely roadĀ 

I kept on walking so that I can find the place that I was meant to go

As I kept walking I came across another womanĀ 

A woman so sweet she took me inĀ 

Took care of meĀ 

I felt at peaceĀ 

But love is all I ever need

Is this woman the right one for me?

I honestly do not knowĀ 

but if she is then we'll run into each other again sometime down the futureĀ 

But it's hard to believe that I had to leave her behindĀ 

Ā 

MVP-Most Valuable Poet

Powerfully written

hope All is well brother

Lvargas

I love your videos and I did subscirbe. Is that other channel still up the udl productions one?

MVP-Most Valuable Poet

thanks for the support brother.........keep going, and move forward in your walk with Jesus

the UDR is going in a different direction, i'm doing a solo YouTube channel

Lvargas

Save me from who I am

Save me from who I'm going to be

Lord I don't understand what the hell is wrong with me

Why am I like this?

When I look into my future

While the world turns away from meĀ 

All I can think of is why the hell am I like thisĀ 

I can't deal with this rain anymoreĀ 

The rain that I though went away

But it didn'tĀ 

It was just hiding in the cloudsĀ 

I'm trying to get just a little bit strongerĀ 

But I don't have a friend in meĀ 

I ain't got nowhere to goĀ 

I ain't got nothing to doĀ 

I'm trying to let goĀ 

But the demons in me are holding onto meĀ 

I'm trying to escape their gripsĀ 

But they're holding onto me tightĀ 

What the hell is going on?Ā 

Why won't you guys let go of me?

Lord Save meĀ 

I know I haven't been the sameĀ 

But these poems that I write nowĀ 

Aren't the same as I used to write in high schoolĀ 

Lord save meĀ 

I beg thee to come my wayĀ 

And save meĀ 

Save me from myself before it's to late.

Ā 

Lvargas

ok sorry but i don't know what was wrong with the first one I posted. But this poem is called save me and it's only my second oneĀ 

I'm slowly returning to writing poetry again.

MVP-Most Valuable Poet

write and express yourself yougn brother

God have a purpose in your life

seek His greatness

read Psalm 91

MVP-Most Valuable Poet

powerful poem

read Psalm 55

The Lord will deliver you away from your enemies.

praise and cry out to Jesus

He'll strengthen you from falling apart and away

Lvargas

Thank MVP, heres a new poem I wrote 2 days ago

Ā 

Ā 

Ā Ā 

Lvargas

Ā 

God by: Luis V

God I'm down

I need you to pick me up

I need you to fill my cup

I don't want the Devil to set me up

So God please help me

Here I am talking to you underneath this tree

But i kind of want to be close to the sea

Because i know you have the key

So God please set me free!

I can't guarantee that I'm not going to fail

Because i know down the road I'm going to slip up and fail

But Jesus were on those nailsĀ 

So I know you'll forgive me if i fail

Because Jesus paid the price

Set me free through his blood

On the cross hanging on those nails

Yes i know somewhere down the road

Those females might distract me

But God i pray the you show me the right one

I want me and her to have fun

I want me and her to go on runs

So God please help me and don't let me go

Don't let me fall

I just want to catch a ball with you

Like maybe a baseball or football

God you will never fail me and i know that

So please just give the devil an uppercut.

Ā 

Ā 

MVP-Most Valuable Poet

God hears your prayers and cries

Be strong

Read Psalms 63-be edify and inspire

Additional Resources

Get AI Feedback on your poem

Interested in feedback on your poem? Try our AI Feedback tool.
Ā 

Ā 

If You Need Support

If you ever need help or support, we trust CrisisTextline.org for people dealing with depression. Text HOME to 741741