more senseless violence

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eyes were dripping from her eyes

state of mind fragile

after findong out her uncle was gun down

by a lowly thug

over what

a woman

listen people

we need to learn how to let go

and move on

stop claiming someone you dont have anymore

stop pursuing someone that is not there

this particular character didn't know how to let it go

ignorance continues to poison hatred to hearts

where it have no soul

soul that will never recover from rejection

mentality of greed

where if i don't have her, nobody else will

next thing you know

there was a scuffle outside

shots rang

the victim was hit in the chest 

blood was scattered all over the streets

in which the bullet penetrated through the heart

leaving it breathless

uncle's vibrant life lifeless, GONE!!!!!!!!!!

died before his time

my condolescence goes out to the family

when does it end

somebody tell me

please tell me something i don't know

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