mirror

when i look in the mirror

i would see me

but i don't

i see The Lord

i ask Him, my Lord, what are you doing here?

He responds to me, that's the same question I ask you

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Carrillo.Erica96

Our Father will give us a mirror in hopes that our image will reflect our wholesome heart, and beautiful souls. Great poem!

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MARs

Man, this is convicting. I feel that often times we will wonder why God is here in hard situations, but we don't realize that, half the time, God is waiting for us to make the first move. Like, He knows we have the potential to change our life for the better, it just takes a little time for us to see that.

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This is conviction because my love for The Lord is endless
God loves us, no matter what we do, God is there with us
We need to seek Him
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MARs

I was wondering if you could check out some of my poetry? It would be great to hear your opinion and get some feedback.

 

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Absolutely
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MARs

Thanks so much, I really appreciate it.

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1SP

Some may say that this is the most prolific piece by Mr. MVP, as his words depict the beauty of faith, the strength in the bond between all mankind and the Holy Spirit, and the demand for the image of God within.

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That's the beauty of poetry
Whether it's long or short, it's about conveying a message that inspires others in believing there is hope

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