mentor

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A mentor...
 
Is your guardian angel
that echoes wisdom
to your ignorant ears and close mind
to not become him
but to live a better life than he did
 
Have you met your mentor?
i wish i had one
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KenBarbs

Hey man, this really hit me hard. Good work man, this is deep.

MVP-Most Valuable Poet

thats the beauty of poetry

can impact with few words

thank you for the support

appreciate it

check out my other poems i wrote

Angelwith1wing

I like how you give your own little definition of a mentor in such a creative way instead of just putting down the Webster definition. Your creativity is brilliant on so many levels. I got a lump in my throat when I read the last two line ("Have you met your mentor?/ i wish i had one"). You make me want to appreciate every blessing I have in my life. God bless you. Keep writing on my friend.

MVP-Most Valuable Poet

the last two lines are powerful

who didn't want someoen to take one under one's wing and guide

never have it so i share this to all

thank you for reading

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