Jaden and Margo charted a boat

to go deep-sea diving for a day.

Then the storm came out of nowhere

   with insane winds and frequent thunder.

The boat's captain would not make it.


Five hours after the wreck:

Jaden slowly gained consciousness

   as Margo tended to their minor injuries.

The boat had washed upon the shore of an island.


Five weeks after the wreck:

They'd pulled the boat inland

  a few hundred feet, using a rope.

Any available materials were used 

  to make a (temporary) campsite.


Five years after the wreck:

It was just those two. The whole time.

A cargo shipt or two must have lost boxes of goods

  that had washed ashore now and then.

They made a life on an empty island

and even accepted it eventually.


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