Lucky Number 13

Location

one cut two

its what you do

three cut four

when you're feeling poor

five cut six

thinking no one gives a lick

seven cut eight

you slowly tempt fate

nine cut ten

you sat in your den

eleven cut twelve

into your problems you delve

lucky cut thirteen

hidden, never to be seen.

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savigirl14

Better than thirteen going on fourteen cuts.  But its still a powerful poem.

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