Love Under the Sun

Our love so great let it be ever Shown

Like salt spread on obsidian black Stone

Our hearts beating in such great Rhapsody

Syncing together in just Harmony


Let the devout reverent choir Sing

As upon your angelic hand a Ring

With eyes so pure made from drops of sun light

And to others they cause feelings of Spite


To sit here now among the brightest Stars

Drawing hearts with our fingers against Mars

Like a Wolf and his prey I hunt for You

Even in death our love can't say Adieu


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