A love note for her


United States
39° 17' 45.0528" N, 76° 25' 17.7564" W

The cold air and my skin collide
I got my jacket and came inside
I turned my head and you I saw
Your beauty left me in shock and awe
I'm truly blessed by your complexion
Something about it screams perfection
Your sugar lips and your rosy cheeks
Make my day seven days a week
You glance at me, I lose my breath
My heart is pounding, I'm scared to death
There's something about you I just can't resist
But do you even know I exist?
There's love in your heart yet you keep it at bay
But love isn't love til' you give it away


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