Love not Eros

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Swimming deep, drowning quickly

light from the surface dimming with each passing second

though I can still look into your eyes

and as I look into your eyes, our lips collide, it feels divine.

 

Lovers of different elements

as our lips touch we simultaneously experience what it is for the air to caress the earth below

the earth then shakes as the lovers awake from the dream called love

never having experienced such life in even their most thrilling moments of wakefulness

who was that boy I met under the water's surface.

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