Lost At Sea

i feel us drifting

farther and farther we go

as the days become longer

and the sun shines stronger

seems like you can't feel

as if the world ain't real

i won't morph fate

i won't force love

the currents are shifting

and i feel lost at sea

alone as always since you're not with me

 

Comments

Grant-Grey Porter Hawk Guda

Powerful expression. Always let poetry fill your life. Keep expressing your heart.  

lesliepho

that means a lot. thank you so much ❤️

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