Lost Love

I saw your Picture I Smiled.
I heard your Voice I Smiled.
I felt your Touch and, I Smiled.

I was Pained when there was no Thought.
I was Pained when there was no Emotion.
I was Pained when there was no Contact.

I Cried when I saw you’re Picture.
I Cried when I heard your Voice.
I Cried when I didn't feel your Touch.

I Lost the sense.
I Knew it was over
I Died.

Comments

RebeccaYSPerez

there has been a barrage of lost love poems I have come across from. But I guess it is true what you feel tends to gravitate you towards that which would share your emotion. This poem was beautiful and perfectly displayed the contrast between the two times that you saw their picture, heard their voice, and felt their touch.

Becca.

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