The Lord spoke to me

Saturday morning 

The Lord spoke to me in my dream

In that dream, I was preaching the sermon

challenging the congregation 

if we don’t love each other

how can we go out in the community to love others

the greatest commandment is to love our Lord

with all our hearts, mind , and soul

then love our neighbors as we love ourselves 

the congregation scattered like roaches 

the arena was empty 

Lord’s message got across

 

Sunday morning

The Lord spoke to me again in my dream

I saw a glimpse of Heaven

i was one of God’s angels going to different cities, different countries

preaching the gospel until I met someone 

somehow, I prejudge that looks different

The Lord scoffed at me stating very clearly 

Dumb and arrogant 

that moment humbled me to be obedient 

The Lord forgave me of my sins

He use me to carry out His mission

thank you Lord for speaking to me

i need U

 

This poem is about: 
My community
Our world

Comments

Inkloader

Please read my "Snowflakes Can Be Heavy". I enjoy your writing

MVP-Most Valuable Poet

I'll read your poem 

continue to check out my other poems

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Annette M Velasquez

I like your positivity and enthusiasm... Also, the spoken word style! Check out some of my stuff, when you can.

MVP-Most Valuable Poet

thank you 

i'll continue to check out and support your work

check out my other poems

Annette M Velasquez

I realize that I previously made just a very short, unhelpful comment on this... I'll now go into the poetics, and most importantly, the meaning. First of all, it is honest and clear but also speaks of the most important message of all- God's Love, an agape love... this is the one message that the world needs more than anything else... some spread it as preachers, some as activists, some as humanitarians... we, as writers- and that is a unique gift and a priveledge!

MVP-Most Valuable Poet

The Lord is speaking to me in the Bible, dreams, other aspects of life where His presence is felt

I adore Him , I relentlessly pursue the possession of Him (Phillipian 3:10-14)

it's about helping Him build His Kingdom

Annette M Velasquez

He speaks to me through everyday things... and I try to convey that message to others via poetry. To build good will, peace and unity is about building His Kingdom.

MVP-Most Valuable Poet

Amen

thru poetry, lives will be touch

keep writing, and keep reaching in Lord's name

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