LOOGOORLAND.

Thu, 09/16/2021 - 18:27 -- Wired6

Wears you down

Tears you down

Piece by peace

The jigsaw pieces of his body

Falls apart.

 

The Loogoors,

In Loogoor,Loogoor land,

Where he once explored

Try again

2 put his body pieces back together again.

 

Loogoorland are great at mending pieces

Of humanoid body parts

No matter how damaged they are.

 

Rubbery tipped lips

Blow a dusky grey mist

Around his narrow congealed parts.

 

"Wooba,Cooba,Nooba,Toowarb!"

Loogoor whispers in2 jigsaw parts

Particularly his heart.

 

©15/09/2021. Wired6.

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