Loneliness

Sat, 05/17/2014 - 02:39 -- Laylah

I lay alone,

dreaming of the comfort of my bed.

I surely don't know the girl

in the bunk next to me,

or the girl above me.

I wonder why the dark

room that discredits 

the light 

can be so comfortable 

to my roommates. 

Maybe it's just me?

Or maybe it's just them?

The cold loneliness 

sweeps over me.

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