live one day at a time....and make it a masterpiece

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40° 51' 43.8444" N, 73° 53' 9.636" W

avoid negative sources, people, places, and habits
believe in yourself
consider things from other people
don't give up or give in
everything you are looking for lies behind the mask you wear
family and friends are hidden treasures, seek them and enjoy their riches
give more than you planned to
hang on to your dreams
if opportunity doesn't knock, build a door
judge your success by what you had to give up in order to get it
keep trying no matter how hard something gets
love yourself
make it happen
never lie, steal, or cheat
open your arms to change, but don't let go of your values
practice makes perfect
quality, not quantity in anything you do
remember that silence is sometimes the best answer
stop procrastinating
take control of your own destiny
understand yourself in order to understand others
visualize it
when you lose, don't lose the lesson
xcellence in all your efforts
you are unique, nothing can replace you
zero in on your target and go for it

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Comments

Reinanena

If someone needed a positive advice on how to move forward, this will definitely be the poem to read. There are steps to follow in order to be successful, and you have highlighted several of them here. Motivational piece, great job!

MVP-Most Valuable Poet

i asked earlier if you read my latest? u did lol
ty 4 the support and love
i'm going to keep writing
have you written a poem recently?
i read the empty link poem-gave you positive feedback

MVP-Most Valuable Poet

i asked earlier if you read my latest? u did lol
ty 4 the support and love
i'm going to keep writing
have you written a poem recently?
i read the empty link poem-gave you positive feedback

MVP-Most Valuable Poet

i asked earlier if you read my latest? u did lol
ty 4 the support and love
i'm going to keep writing
have you written a poem recently?
i read the empty link poem-gave you positive feedback

MVP-Most Valuable Poet

i asked earlier if you read my latest? u did lol
ty 4 the support and love
i'm going to keep writing
have you written a poem recently?
i read the empty link poem-gave you positive feedback

MVP-Most Valuable Poet

i meant to respond to your original feedback one time
site had a moment (disregard the 3 repeated replies lol)

Reinanena

lol I saw that too funny, it happened to e already...and no havent finished writing the one i'm one now. I usually write at nite, it's peaceful and I can get it done quicker. BTW I did reply back and thanks for the feedback, I understand completely however, its hard for me to write outside of my life, never tried too but maybe I will...something new I guess

MVP-Most Valuable Poet

your ability to express yourself freely is all talent-u have that
part of being a better is write about other topics and thinking outside of your immediate surroundings
trust me when i say it nicki

Reinanena

I will try to think outside the box...you're officially now my mentor :)

MVP-Most Valuable Poet

i'm officially your mentor
as a mentor, i will challenge you to be a greater poet
trust in all that i say

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