Lifeless

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I curse the world 

that murdered you.

I curse the murderous words they used

to make this weapon.

one by one they entwined

to create the rope

that stopped your heart.

I curse the world 

murdered you.

they left you hanging here

Lifeless.

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savigirl14

Wow this is really good. It has a lot of anger towards the noose that took away a person you fully loved and cared about. I am so sorry about your loss but this poem is very powerful. Please read my poems and tell me what you think.

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