Life Feels Empty

Tue, 04/23/2013 - 17:01 -- jjw33


United States
34° 26' 1.7628" N, 118° 30' 56.124" W

Life feels empty
When you're not there.
All the twinkling stars
So full of despair

Life feels tragic
When you're not around,
No hope, no happiness,
Head facing the ground.

Life feels hopeless
When you're gone.
So lost, so afraid,
It goes on and on.

Life felt so good
When you loved me.
We seemed so happy,
Forever together we would be.


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