Life Experience

Mon, 04/29/2013 - 17:15 -- Jackiee


United States
47° 28' 14.8584" N, 119° 28' 3.9396" W

Life is the opportunity that God gave us all
Love is what gives me a foundation
Foundation is what builds up my strength
Strength is what gives me courage
Courage is what helps me succeed
Succeeding is what can lead me to fail
But failure is what keeps me going
For life isn’t about who has the brains to succeed
Rather than who has the time to fail and learn
As to learning is an experience no one can take away
Only I have the choice to remember or to forget



Very good. I like your wordings. Very good.

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