Letting Go

Sat, 10/11/2014 - 21:09 -- ztuoni

If you want to live, Live!

feel the breeze

caress your face

as you walk on the stars

of the galaxy without fear


If you want to let go, do so

loosen your grip

on the reins of life

breathe, you're a feather

floating in particles

of the universe



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