A Letter To My Mother

Dear Mom,

I know you hate that I quit basketball,

But that wasn’t the beginning of my downfall.

Tearing my ACL broke me to pieces,

Put it back together but there are still creases.

Nobody understands how I feel,

Maybe I will never heal.

My body is constantly tired and frail,

My dreams locked up in a treacherous jail.

I put my heart into work to ease the pain,

But nothing is good when done in vain.

I’m sorry I became a disappointment,

I cried after every doctors appointment.

I’ve been an athlete since four,

But my leg can handle the pain no more.

You call me a quitter but you don’t know,

How it feels to fall this low.

I am writing this to apologize, 

So that maybe you will realize,

That your kid does not need to be a star,

For you to love who they really are.

Thank you for taking the time to read this,

From the daughter you now dismiss.

This poem is about: 
Me
My family
Guide that inspired this poem: 
Poetry Terms Demonstrated: 

Comments

Additional Resources

Get AI Feedback on your poem

Interested in feedback on your poem? Try our AI Feedback tool.
 

 

If You Need Support

If you ever need help or support, we trust CrisisTextline.org for people dealing with depression. Text HOME to 741741