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I look up at the sky and smile.

I see the curvature of the clouds,

And I just stare for a while.

Life is awesome, nearly flawless.

What more can I really ask?

 

I hear the laughter of the children at the park,

They are worry free and searching for adventures to embark.

Life is awesome, nearly flawless.

What more can I really ask?

 

I see an elderly couple walking.

Legs strong, and bodies stocky.

Life is awesome, nearly flawless.

What more can I really ask?

 

I smell the scent of blossom.

Indicating that life is real, and that it is truly awesome.

 

This poem is about: 
Our world

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