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Peshawar Pakistan.
United States

She danced I continued my flute.
Noise out of her anklet my craze.
Eye's on her, soul out of breath.
Don't express my gratitude.
You could ruin up this moment.
Emotions set up on stage.
In all clapping, she disappeared.
Need alot than such departure.
All I was left with beads.
Gem's out of her necklace.
You are lying Aleem Nasir.
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