Let's Do This

Tue, 03/06/2018 - 15:03 -- mnorton

I don't want pain and suffering

I don't want our lives to be cut short

I don't want this pain of me memories

I don't want you to be my enemy

I don't want you hitting me and spiting at me

Don't think this is a joke just try and and fix this please

I am human and need others

You are human and need others

Just come to me and I will help you

You are troubled and you know it

But come to me and everything can go back to normal

And we will forget about this

I don't want people to call you a monster 

Go get the time machine 

So we can go back and fix this

Pain is inside of you and me 

it is killing us both

the torture inside is growing

come on let's do this right now

Let's burry our worries beneath the cold floor

Hoping they won't came running for us again

Let these worries be gone forever

 

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Comments

mnorton

nice story

mnorton

Nice story

mnorton

That was good I liked how you expressed your feelings.

mnorton

this poem was writtin very well though it made me feel sad.

mnorton

this was sad and really intresting

mnorton

good story made feel sad.

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