As every hair of mine fell Thank you for loving me so well How can I thank you dear For being ever so near I do not t want to leave you empty handed Babe, I'll never be stranded To the sky, the moon, the stars Or even higher For looking up I'll never tire My darling don't look up for me Look in your heart That's where I'll be I want so badly to stay here with you But I know as long as I'm sleeping You will be beside me weeping He is waiting for me I am waiting on you If you need me to stay I'll try you know But my King is waiting So please darling Let me go
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