Left For Dead

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Tried my best to please the beast, but alls forgotten wen you take a seat,faith is replaced with unspeakable hate and rage that could make the earth shake,only thing that was stuck in my mind was diffrent ways that I could make them all realize,I swallowed my pride and asked for an open hand but was rejected when they saw that i couldnt stand,God saved my pride because i was surely gonna cry,my mind was dead my soul mislead, my faith in bed while my hate ran ahead,my body felt dead i was surely mislead, the pats on the back the praises from the head, the friendship we shared all died with my leg

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