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Too close, too strong, too fast

how is this suppose to last. 

Too close, too strong, too fast
how do we just forget about the past.
 
Too close, too strong, too fast
this thing is on a roll.
 
Too close, too strong, too fast
we're seriously out of control.
 
Too close, too strong, too fast
but what happens when it ends?
 
Too close, too strong, too fast
who's ready for that pain again?
 
The feelings are too strong, it's happening too fast, how can you be so sure?
 
See when people are so close and the feelings are so strong, it doesn't matter that it happens fast.
 
Because they care the most, and the feelings will be around for so long, that things like this can't help but last.

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