Knocked Down

Mon, 01/27/2014 - 13:28 -- lizabec

 

I was scared and unsure to love again

He took me by the hand

He showed me a world I didn't know

 

I let him and grasped his palm firmly

He told me all his secrets

He gave me his whole world

 

I took it for granted

He became a different man

He said he never changed

 

I saw it in his eyes

He lost the stars that once shined 

He said it was over

 

I would have never thought I was the one to to knock him down

 

 

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