Just Then

Wed, 01/17/2018 - 20:06 -- kelbel4

Pitter patter

drip drop

Rain unending 

Rain never stops

And just when, just when 

the gutter overflows,

and grass rapidly grows

Just when 

dark clouds loom 

and all that's left is gloom 

Just then, just then

the sun daringly makes his move

Feathers and fuzz

flirt and flounce in the mud

Because just when

the storm seemed to consume

Just then, just then 

did the world better bloom 

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