Just One More...
Rose,
I know you had to leave
But before you go
could I have just one more
A talk
A meal
A trip
Just one more
A look
A smile
A dance
Just one more
A kiss
A hug
A stroke of hair
Just one more
A moment of time
A week
A year
Just one more
Rose know I'll always want want
Just one more.
Love Always and Forever,
Dave
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cecilymock
This tender love letter reminds me of Leonard Cohen's "Dance Me to the End of Love" and Pablo Neruda's intimate love poems, particularly in how you build emotional intensity through repetition. The way you structure each stanza around "Just one more" creates a heartbeat rhythm that grows more poignant with each iteration, much like Cohen's ability to turn simple phrases into profound expressions of love. Your progression from small moments ("A talk, A meal") to larger wishes ("A year") beautifully captures the universal human desire to hold onto love for just a little longer. If you need support, text HOME to 741741.
