just making sense of it

Location

it started from a warm reception

to encouraging you in continuation of your healing process

in attempting to assasinate my manhood with vindictive words

that didn't work

you are upset that what i said to you was all facts

though it could've been awfully hurtful

so what you did in return

trying to flip a script and turn the tables on me

as if i was the one with the issues

i don't think so

i admit my flaws

you allow the devil to lie and convey false information

about me

knowing that none of the notions is true

and because you had nothing to say

your way of getting back at me was to hit below the belt

like i always tell you

you push, i'm swinging (not literally)

only a figure of speech so calm down and relax

don't be mislead in anyway

constant back and forths with arguments

in which you try to justify your wrongdoings

it doesn;t work with me when you have emotional moment

and attempt to cry your way out of it

if anything, that infuriate me even more

you had to work on your own insecurities

but i got to give it to you 

getting the support from your therapist saids that you want to make it work

i do to

but right now. i need to fall back and let you workout your own problems

that needs cleansing of personal demons that are hanging on to your happy, but vulnerable soul

as you heal, realize that i'm different from all guys because i'm my own man

same angellic, but powerful voice that echoes love and wisdom

and if you don't know this by now

it's time for me to let go

because next time you attempt for another low blow

it won't happen a second time

i'll just put the nail to the coffin of this relationship

 

 

Guide that inspired this poem: 

Comments

Angelwith1wing

Sounds like you just went through a tough situation similar to mine except you handled it maturely. I decided that everything in my relationships was my fault for the guy would always point the finger at me as if my flaws were bigger than his. Long story short, I cut him off and moved on for I should not be blamed for everything wrong in a relationship. I'm not perfect, but I am a good person who deserves better than that. I like how even though you were close to breaking up with her, you still kept strong in y'all's relationship. Even though, no one deserves to be walked over and mistreated. I like this poem for its wisdom, lesson, and relation to my life. God bless you velezjrrobert and keep writing on my friend:)!!!

MVP-Most Valuable Poet

this poem reflected about a bad argument that nearly went sour

i'm not one to give up, but i will not permit disrespect in any way

nobody is perfect, but there is someone perfect for that person

this poem also gave me patience to cultivate more about my girl

thank you for the luv and support

means so much to me

 

by the way-never blame yourself for all failures, we all make mistakes, that's part of life

you deserve better and you are better than what your relationship had to endure

Additional Resources

Get AI Feedback on your poem

Interested in feedback on your poem? Try our AI Feedback tool.
 

 

If You Need Support

If you ever need help or support, we trust CrisisTextline.org for people dealing with depression. Text HOME to 741741