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The Journey

The struggle is what makes this such a crazy ride but it has its beauty

Being lost souls—that's our common struggle. In the end pain is what unites

We must think about what inside us ignites

We all need a reality check once in a while

We need to realize what we’re here for

And surely we all know that

It’s to be happy

To feel a burning passion for every breath

And that's all life should be

Picture (not) perfect frames

We’re all in shambles once in a while..or all of the time if you don't know my friend serotonin

See the depression gets you stressing

The goal is to get that melatonin flowing

Am I fat? Am I poor? Am I ugly? Am I a good enough?

Well you are

Simply perfect

Stop imagining scenarios that will never be

And just be

We’re all on this crazy ride and not one will make it out alive

Enjoy that smile while you can

Remember it’s all about the good vibe

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asthoma22

I like your poem.  You seem to be going into a philosophical train of thought that is both relatable and perhaps necessary.  My only question to you is what is the journey?  Are you trying to connect the struggle with the journey or are you trying to connect the struggle as a journey?  What is beautiful about the struggle to you and how does that relate to your journey?  You don't have to answer any of these questions.  I just thought this was something to maybe think about as both a poet and a writer.  A poet gives us a picture in a brief, quick, and simple form, but a writer builds a picture out of detail.  What are you giving us as a reader:  the image or the detail?

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