Joe's Deep

Tears like gravel
Queuing behind thirsty eyes
Its like a constipation
Feet aching, brains
Always compensating
Shut eye, listen
Judgement forsaken

Keep drinking, no one's coming
Lone generation
Invisible resistance
Fictional scars meditating
No one's listening
Psychotic under armour manifestation

Sweaty neck, half cut waivor
Smells like vinegar
Incinerating angry paper
Notes of antisocial behavior
Contending upcycled concrete
Chasing defeat

Fast run rat pace
Capsule filled containers
Breathing fresh baked spiders
Blinded by fine fake furniture
Saturated black
Fucking under attack
Listen to Beethoven
Will it ever be over?

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