is it worth the risk

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10458
United States
40° 51' 43.8444" N, 73° 53' 9.636" W

a flower with sharp deadly thorns
a rose of beauteous nature, and divine scent
conversely, an avert coming in contact
sharp needles are there to penetrate your skin
are you the next of kin
a breath taking goddess, with eyes seeking you in seconds
and a face so stunning that it shines with light that can easily dry the tears
however, she lies in the core of scattered broken glasses
is it worth the risk
its like a fear of inhaling the amazing aroma of a meadow to not inject or intake
a deadly disease
like walking blindfolded along the edge of a subway platform
hazard, peril
a hive of honey; most delicious kind that humans can actually taste
the hive may beckon you, but you may get swarm and stung by its bees
tell me something, is it worth the risk
can you honestly distinguish a doubt and a wound?
a wound can pierce your mind, body, and soul
it can scar you and cause agony that will make you tremble
slowly weeping and dying inside
a doubt can irritate you
it can persist and remain with you forever
so tell me now
is it worth the risk

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Comments

Reinanena

Sometimes taking a risk can be one's downfall or a positive life changing experience...The doubt is simply ones conscious reminding us of what we will accept or maybe presenting us with a new blue print of what may happen if we take that risk...Can one handle the situation, can the situation affect us in a good or bad way...great poem

MVP-Most Valuable Poet

life is about taking a risk
it's a metter of knowing what one is up against and making the rright decision
ty 4 your love and support

Cross

trust in love so I thought."if you make a mistake and do not learn from it you are called Stupid, if you learn from it you are called Smart, if someone else makes it and you learn from there mistake you are called WISE". living proof "deadly disease"

MVP-Most Valuable Poet

what's essential in this poem is learning from your experience and moving forward

its about making better choices and understand its consequences

thank you for comment and check out my other poems

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