Inside a Bottle

Fri, 08/09/2013 - 14:17 -- Jdubb

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Inside a bottle

circling round and round,

fluttering by,

bouncing, bobbing, 

all mixed up.

Inside a bottle

try to capture,

slow the movement,

stop the noise,

still, it goes on and on.

Break the bottle 

onto paper it flows, 

With my pen, a calm begins,

Words come together,

My thoughts fly free.

Comments

thisispoetryproject

This is amusing, to say the least! I love how you have given your words not only Life, but personality, strength, and a fighting spirit. This is a true reflection of the way many people are trapped and oppressed due to their inability to express.

Great poem! :)

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