Impulsive love

Location

62002
United States
38° 56' 7.4724" N, 90° 8' 24.4968" W

I sit here on the cruel world..... Alone.
And when I look up I see these beautiful luminous objects in the sky.
I pause time to further gaze at their beauty.
And when I realize that they are closer than reality I begin my journey. I travel up to the very beautiful creatures that I had found glistening. Once I arrived to the place of darkness and sat their floating I saw many, but I specifically went to the one at which I saw when I was on earth.
Although he was very bright I could see him perfectly.
He was everything I could ever ask for.
Utterly gorgeous, sparkle in his eyes, and explosive personality I loved him.
We became one.
But our love was only short lived. After a while
He began to lose his luster.
His eyes grew cold.
His personality fizzled.
I was so reliant on how warm and bright he was I became cold as well.
I wanted to take him to the sun so he could warm up but it was too late.
His last flame went out..... My life would never be the same.
Pure darkness consumed my life again and I thought that I could find another star to fill the place of my one true love.
I was still floating, confused when I begin falling back to the very cruel place I wanted to escape.
I entered the atmosphere a changed woman and when I came back to reality I found being alone much worse than before.

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