Impatience

Proverbs 29:9 

If a wise person goes to court with a foolish person,
there is no peace whether he is angry or laughs.

 

Impatience: taking self to court

 

You are sitting on my shoulder watching the world go by

You are dreaming of yesterday and what things ought to be

Every day you are growing bolder and I wonder why

In getting older you should contemplate to go and set me free

 

You have great expectations of everyone except self

You judge about everything like you own it all

You lead me to frustration digging a wishing well

It seems that I never win while you have a ball

 

Experience will help me to really conquer you

Give me back my duffle bag ... I’m going in a circle

What can release me ... is it living for the truth?

That only Christ will sway if obedience removes the hurdle

 

Jan Wienen

 

This poem is about: 
Me

Comments

mnorton

This is really good. I think you should write some deep in inside feelings words more. But otherwise it is really good.

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