IMMORTAL!!!

 

 

That pain more pleasurable

Than pleasure itself

Our story I'll keep immortal

Like a well kept fable

I know years from now I'll visit those places

Where our memories we once made

You'll be far away in another dream

From your mind I'll slowly when fade

But this pain is beautiful

It ripes my soul apart

And there's pleasure in bearing it

When two souls never gets apart

The bodies intertwine with another

But the soul settles in just one

But our story I'll keep immortal

Like a well kept fable..

 

This poem is about: 
Our world

Comments

Antriksh

Beautifully written. 🥰

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