I'm possible(Impossible)

 
Ive grown out of my dispair
Nothing can withstand me now
Even though lifes not so fair
I play my part and then I bow
 
People doubt me everyday
They misunderstand my point
Only God knows how I'm made
For He's put will in every joint
 
I've set a focus in my mind
A great desire to succeed
But the beast in all mankind
Says not to worry when you bleed
 
I will deviate from normal
I will carve a different path
Follow me if you're not formal
Let's go seek the aftermath
 
We can find an inspiration
Start this splendor with a spark
Ignite a fire in every nation
To shine a beacon in the dark
 
Plant a seed to harvest later
Rejuvinate a generation
Show our love to every hater
Peace is our invitation
 

Comments

Angelwith1wing

Correct me if I'm wrong, but you sound like a true follower of Christ. If you are, well then that is awesome for I have been hoping to find another brother and/or sister on the web who wants to spread His love to others. I pray that God gives you all that you need for the journey ahead for you have some great writing skills that would help uplift lost people in His kingdom. God bless you and keep writing on my friend:)!!! 

Fabianciobanas

Yes I happen to love my savior:) thank you for the critique 

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