I'm In Love With You, I Don't Want To Live Without You

Your hands, you hate

I love when hey hold mine.

Your scar on your chest

I trace and outline.

You say you have too many freckles

But I say you don't have enough.

You thnk I am bothered by your chin hair

I  never told you I like a little scruff.

You complain about being too pale

But pale has never looked so good on anyone.

You think that your hair is uncut and messy

I think it matches our times together; fun.

You worry about messing up.

Or being to silent.

Everything you do fascinates me,

You're never to quiet.

Will I like you,

I like you a lot.

My heart has already,

 Given you a spot.

 

 

 

This poem is about: 
Me

Comments

Chloe Dunavent

I wrote about my caring and loving boyfriend who I would bring on a deserted island with me. He is very intelligent and I know he would create a way to get off the island. He is also very insecure about himself because of what people in the past have said to him so if we were on an island by ourselves, I would help him gain his confidence in believing that he really is a great guy and he has nothing to worry about.

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