I'm a living women

Thu, 09/19/2013 - 23:20 -- JanJan

I'm a living women who breaths

I wonder when I will stop living

I see laughter around me and 

I want to join in 

I'am a living women who breaths 



I pretend that I will never flay away 

I feel my wings expanding for


I touch those wings and feel my

Life going away 

I worry when I will come to an end 

I cry when I'am lonely because

I feel abandoned 


I'am a living women who breaths 

I understand that I have to go 

I say , can , I stay , at least one more minute

I dream of going 

I try to stop myself 

I hope I can before it is too late 

I'm a breathing women who breathes 

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