I'd like to see

You know what ticks me off?

How people can be so cold 

Dirty looks and a lousy greeting

I'm new to this place, it's my first meeting

All I want is a simple smile

I'd like to see that every once in awhile 

 

You know what ticks me off?

How people can be so selfish 

When you give them your all and they take more 

Gave so much now I'm out the door

If only they saw all my frustration

I'd like to see them with more realization

 

You know what ticks me off?

Writing poems for money

Because one lie after another

No support from my father or mother

Working my ass off everyday

I'd like to see me make it one day

 

You know what ticks me off?

How I'm filled with so much anomisty

I'd like to see me finally be free

 

 

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