I wear a thick sweater

Sun, 07/20/2014 - 12:12 -- kjj1995

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I wear a thick sweater in this COLD world.

Using smoking as ventilation,

To rid all the intoxication,

Longing the moon and the star is the final destination

Ambition makes us naïve of the TEMPORARY wealth.

We steal,

We kill,

Guess eternal life will remain unreal

Cut off the boundaries between us and the wild.

Might as well live together because we both live,

UNTAMED LIFESTYLES

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