i thank you my sister (moment of silence part 2)

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when open mic concluded

i got nothing but love

like an angel that touch everyone's hearts

one of the greatest poets in my lifetime

approach me

and resonated something that was more

powerful than the man of steel

 

she said 

there are poets that naturally got it

and there are poets who don't

you got it

to hear it from her 

sent a chill up and down my spine that was electifying 

like the people's champ

i was humbled

it meant so much to me

i thank you marisposa

 

even more incredible

a little girl approach me

and said 

i like your poems

i asked her does she write

she replied yes

i encouraged her 

by telling her to write

and not be afraid to express yourself

no one has the judge

she stepped back 

digesting what i just said

and smiled

like an angel

i touched her heart

 

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Comments

QuamiaDennis

I really do like this. I was reading your other poems and I must let you know that you are such a strong and deep writer. I love it.

MVP-Most Valuable Poet

im very humble by your comments

im glad you enjoyed it

check out my other poems

Eunoia

my problem is hearing, its so hard to hear your voice sometimes, your beat, when i read because its unique

 

i am sorry about your beauty poem

vur i can't feel anything from it

 

i can't maybe its just me

 

yoy are good 

 

dont stop

 

MVP-Most Valuable Poet

elaborate when you say its hard to hear my voice sometimes

read my poems again and interpreted from a different perspective-see what happens

 

thank you for complimenting my poems-im very humble

check out my other poems

Claire Chondol

Something like a shift in the sound that changes the word. I think it was 'get off of him/it'. Confusion there int he sound. I'll keep checking.

 

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Claire Chondol

Great! Lovely to see my little rappers have found a safehaven. I was starting to get seriously pissed!

 

MVP-Most Valuable Poet

it's about being an inspiration

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