I Just Can't Wait To Be King Rewrite (my version)

I serve a mighty King, so enemies beware!

 

I’ve never seen Him anywhere

So how do you know He’s there?

 

He has performed miracles

Like no King has before.

He picks me up when I am down.

Against sin, He won the war.

 

How can you believe such things?

 

Oh, I just can’t wait to see the King!

No more sick days.                      Now when you say that-

No more bills to pay.                 What are you-

No more rules to follow.                 What you don’t realize-

No one saying see here.              Now see here!

Free from annoying things like braces. That's definitely not--

Free from homework and bad places.

I think it’s time that you

Ask Him into your heart.

 

I don’t need advice

From little children for a start.

If this is all you’re going to talk about

Count me out.

Out of attention, out of this place.

I would never doubt

What you speak of are false things.

 

Oh, I just can’t wait to see the King!

Everybody look left.

Everybody look right.

Everywhere you look He’s

Always standing by your side.

 

No He’s not!

 

Let every creature go for broke and sing

Let’s hear it loud and clear. Let it ring.

Death and sin have lost their sting.

Oh, I just can’t wait to see the King.

Oh, I just can’t wait to see the King.

Oh, I just can't wait...

Just can't wait

To see the King!

 

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