I Feel That You Were the Fire

Fri, 05/23/2014 - 03:26 -- Severia

I feel like that.

That pale greyish wisp of ash that crumbles beneath the slightest touch,

That's been consumed by a ravenous fire that first caressed

Then incinerated every fiber of it's being.

I feel like that.

A disintegrating shell of what once was, void of meaning.

And I feel that you were the fire.


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