I Could Go On Forever

i'm scared of getting close

how could anyone handle

someone so deranged

it really blows

having everything hidden

because eventually someone will want to know the truth

the thruth is that i'm broken

i destroy everything that i'm given

i hate myself

i want to die

how could anyone love someone like this-

Comments

Elrast

I identify with this poem. Good job!

Queen Aisha

My heart goes out to you! I understand what it feels like to be there, but I think that it is easier to love something broken than perfect because perfect can be boring.

Royal Blood

Perfect is boring because it unable to appreciate your imperfections :)

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